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15 October 2009 @ 07:37 pm
"In Search of Absolution" - MA - Action/adventure/Mystery - Epic - (Hogwarts)  
Username: kimberlylynne
Name: Kimberly
Age: 22

Title: In Search of Absolution
Rating: MA
Length: Epic (>60,000 words/25 chapters so far)
Genre: action/adventure, angst, drama, mystery, romance, tragedy
Characters: Hermione, Draco, Ginny, Harry, Pansy
Era: Hogwarts
Status: In Progress

Hermione, Ginny, Pansy, Draco, Harry, & Blaise (or Ron? not sure yet) are involved in an Irish curse. Here is the link to what is complete so far http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4781718/1/Restless.

Editing Needs: brit-picking, canon, characterisation, consistency, dialogue,grammar/spelling, plot
I just need an extra set of eyes to catch things I can't seem to see. I am a grad student so the writing should be fairly strong. My main weakness is dialogue, it just seems too clipped to me. I would like to see some brit-picking, as I am American and from the south. Two points against me! I also need to make sure there are no huge plot holes (I am sure they are there, I just can't see them!!) and the story flows.